Your front cover seems to look quite empty. There seems to be alot of white space which could be filled in by the use of sell lines, pictures and banners. Your picture of the model seems to be rough around the edges which needs to be smoothened out. the picture also looks unedited and there can be more that can be done to enhance the quality. The font used on your sell lines does not connect well with your genre and seems to be quite random. Your masthead however does look visually better as the font style contextualises with the meaning of the word. You have included key elements such as the masthead, sell lines,date and barcode however you need to include a headline as it is a key convention. The headline needs to link in with your model and needs to stand out. 7/20
Brandon - you have not made any changes even after the recommendations both Daljit and I have provided. This is an E grade standard and needs major improvements to progress.
Your front cover seems to look quite empty. There seems to be alot of white space which could be filled in by the use of sell lines, pictures and banners. Your picture of the model seems to be rough around the edges which needs to be smoothened out. the picture also looks unedited and there can be more that can be done to enhance the quality. The font used on your sell lines does not connect well with your genre and seems to be quite random. Your masthead however does look visually better as the font style contextualises with the meaning of the word. You have included key elements such as the masthead, sell lines,date and barcode however you need to include a headline as it is a key convention. The headline needs to link in with your model and needs to stand out.
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Brandon - you have not made any changes even after the recommendations both Daljit and I have provided. This is an E grade standard and needs major improvements to progress.
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